The Poem

Rape Fantasy

by Shannon Phillips

They called it a rape, those European artisans.

They don’t know that he decorated with cobwebs and vertigo,
burlap shadows and suffering, tapestries beaded with broken ribcages,
hallways of parched throat.

They don’t know the descent into a cavern of ripe blood vessels
glinting like stained glass, burnt quartz,
pomegranate teeth.

They don’t know he made me
stay with a kiss, a
mouth of sour jewelry,
fruit kiss.

They don’t know the truth of their bone-white Queen;

They don’t know I let them
call it a rape

so that I remain my mother’s good daughter,
and my husband remains unaware
that it wasn’t the seeds.

Shannon Phillips has an MFA in creative writing from California State University, Long Beach. Her work has been published in Pearl, Verdad, Rectangle, and RipRap, where this poem first appeared. In 2010, she placed second in Beyond Baroque’s First Ever Poetry Contest. Currently, she edits Carnival, an online literary magazine.

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Comments (9)

Andy G

November 15th, 2012 at 6:39 PM    


Really cool retelling of the Persephone story.

Melanie

November 15th, 2012 at 8:09 PM    


Such a powerful and insightful piece. Feeds both the senses and the intellect. Gorgeous.

J.dT.

November 15th, 2012 at 10:54 PM    


Love that line “they don’t know I let them

Call it rape”

Very cunning of this Persephone character. It’s a new voice for her, one that isn’t docile, and that makes sense- after all she was such a terrible queen that you wouldn’t even dare speak her name.

Beautiful work.

eileen

November 16th, 2012 at 2:06 AM    


beautifully told .. it is powerful and disturbiing.

Kitty

November 16th, 2012 at 6:52 AM    


so powerful and such a wonderful writer! i have never read a poem written by Shannon that i have not fallen in love with. this poem evokes emotions and a sexuality that creates a images in your head

Adesh Kaur

November 16th, 2012 at 7:34 AM    


Wow! You are a smart poet. Thank you. I loved this poem.

Lisa Segal

November 16th, 2012 at 5:34 PM    


wow.
really sharp.
and red.

Gerald Locklin

November 16th, 2012 at 9:12 PM    


Love it!

tommy

December 10th, 2012 at 7:31 PM    


marvelous. we really need to hear more from Shannon.

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