The Poem

The Man in Charge of Watering

by Jack Grapes

The summer sun, strong and bright,
sits down on the bricks in the front yard.
Cars which have nothing to do with bricks
go by on the street heading home.
It’s Wednesday afternoon,
middle of the week,
when you can put everything you’d planned
on Monday
back on the back burner.
A lady goes by; I nod and smile and say hello.
She’s carrying a bag of groceries.
I think she lives down the block.
I should go back inside,
the sun’s hot on my face,
and I’m not wearing my hat.
Lori admonishes me
“Don’t forget to wear your hat.”
I came outside to fill the fountain
and forgot to wear my hat.
Now, I’m just standing here,
looking around, saying hello
to the neighbors as they pass by.
When we first bought this house
when Josh was two years old,
I used to go outside after the sun had gone down
and hose the grass on the front and side lawn.
Such a peaceful time, and the back spray from the hose
cooled everything down.
I was Mr. Homeowner watering his lawn.
There are flowers blooming here
that Lori knows the names of, but I can’t
seem to remember their names.
Jasmine, Bougianvillea, true geraniums.
I can’t keep track of them all.
I’ve tried, but the names elude me.
Even the grass has a name,
but I’ve forgotten that too.
This is what heaven will be like.
Anytime I want, I’ll be able to water the lawn.
All my friends will walk by,
I’ll nod, say hello, watch them pass along
going wherever people go in heaven.
I won’t have to do anything but water the lawn.
And the water, you should see the water in heaven.
Crystal clear, light as a feather, so to speak,
diamonds of light.
The back spray will cool my face and head.
And the grass. You’d think grass
in heaven wouldn’t need watering,
but you’re in for quite a surprise.
Everything up here needs watering.
Even the bricks, the bricks that sit in the sun
getting hot.
Even God, who soaks up all our prayers.
Even God will need a spray or two
to cool down.
I’ll be the waterer.
The man in charge of watering everything
and everyone,
the man spraying water in heaven.
That’ll be my job.
When God comes by, asks how I’m doing,
I’ll say, “Fine, just fine.”
Then I’ll turn and ask,
“Need a little watering?”
And God will nod,
say, “Sure, soak me down, just
don’t wet the groceries.”
And I’ll give God a good spray.
That’ll be my job —
the man in charge
of watering God.

 

Jack Grapes is an award-winning poet and playwright. He will be reading from his new book, “THE NAKED EYE: New and Selected Poems 1987-2012″ at Beyond Baroque in Venice, California, on August 26th at 1pm, and September 9th at 1pm. Reservations and tickets here

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Comments (106)

Sandra Blazynski

July 26th, 2012 at 3:29 PM    


Jack Grapes has been the man in charge of watering God for decades now, right here, right now. I love this poem and I love Jack Grapes.

Kathy Goldman

July 26th, 2012 at 4:50 PM    


This poem took me on its journey. Even though I traveled along, I was a little resistant to entering heaven. Then, Jack convinced me–that would be an okay heaven.

Lisa Segal

July 26th, 2012 at 6:20 PM    


Another wonderful poem by Jack Grapes . . . !
He really does have a way
of making it seem like
the gods and goddesses are here with us.
Or, perhaps, are us . . . .
Thank you, Wendy.

Julia Rankin Morandi

July 26th, 2012 at 11:17 PM    


So insightful as is everything Jack shares with us. He forces us to see the world, real or imaginary, through a different perspective. He is a gifted writer and mentor of many. Thank you, Jack for sharing your world.

Andy

July 27th, 2012 at 1:11 AM    


I wish Jack instead of water, would at least spray some Martini&Rossi, extra dry, on us.
It would really feel like heaven!

Andy Kolo

Patricia Scruggs

July 27th, 2012 at 1:51 AM    


Another brilliant poem by Grapes. I love the way it opens with such an ordinary scene — the summer sun "sits down on the bricks in the front yard." How easily he draws us in. Thank you, Jack. Thank you Wendy.

cyn

July 27th, 2012 at 7:18 PM    


Never heard of you before Finding Jack Grapes' poem. Thanks to Wendy I get a good read from Jack, my favorite poet. Such high quality I need—please add me to your mailing list and thank you for your excellent taste.
Cyn

Nancy L

July 27th, 2012 at 7:41 PM    


lovely.. lovely.. this could very well change my day..

Alice Hofheimer

July 27th, 2012 at 7:43 PM    


Great selection Wendy! And wonderful poem, Jack — yes, a bit of heaven on earth.

Kathleen Keagy

July 27th, 2012 at 9:05 PM    


Pulled me right out of my day and into the moment. Thank you for sharing the backspray wih us.

Carolyn Ziel

July 28th, 2012 at 1:39 AM    


LOVE this poem…I love the journey to heaven and back, to the stars and back, to Jack's heart and….

snappyp

July 28th, 2012 at 2:11 AM    


You are right. I think we are already in heaven tasting the water and feeling the back spray. God bless you Mr. Watering Man.

Dbridson

July 28th, 2012 at 4:19 AM    


wonderful piece Jack! Love the transition line! Thanks for sharing your talent.

Candace Culp

July 28th, 2012 at 5:03 AM    


Week after week, year after year, Jack has been watering men and women, watching over them as they grow into poets and writers. God will be in great hands.
Another wonderful choice by Wendy.

Kelly Ebsary

July 28th, 2012 at 7:11 AM    


Jack waters more than lawns…he grows human lives. xo

Suzanne

July 28th, 2012 at 12:49 PM    


To take the mundane and make it sacred, that's a great poem! Thank you Jack Grapes!

Frank James

July 28th, 2012 at 3:53 PM    


Jack Grapes is amazing!

It’s like you’re inside his head, seeing everything he sees…his every move, your every move…

I love his work.

Kudos Jack!

Jan McGuire

July 28th, 2012 at 5:20 PM    


yes yes yes yes yes and yes thank you jack for watering me…now everytime I water my garden after reading this these images play over and over like a song…the power of poetry to take the mundane and make it extraordinary.

Alexis Rhone Fancher

July 28th, 2012 at 6:36 PM    


Before reading a Jack Grapes poem, I get comfortable, then strap myself in. I know I'm in for one hell of a ride! Kudos to Wendy Rainey & Cultural Weekly for your continued great taste.

CulturalWeekly

July 28th, 2012 at 7:01 PM    


Thank you for the kind words. It is always a pleasure to have poets in our midst.

Jan

July 28th, 2012 at 8:23 PM    


yes..thank you wendy and cultural weekly!

Jan M

July 28th, 2012 at 8:26 PM    


and wendy and cultural weekly, thank YOU again for these wonderful pieces!!!

Brenda Freiberg

July 28th, 2012 at 8:34 PM    


Jack has a way of putting life into perspective and of transporting us all to Heaven. We just forget sometimes that we are here . Thanks for reminding us, Jack, about where we are!. And thanks to Wendy and Adam for sharing this genius right here in our midst.

fergoskyfa

July 28th, 2012 at 10:15 PM    


I love this pose and this poesy. Green grass and Mr. Grapes: indeed a heavenly combination.

Kurt Kamm

July 29th, 2012 at 12:36 AM    


A wonderful poem, like everything Jack writes. But….I can't help but wonder…is DWP in charge of the spigot?

floppydj

July 29th, 2012 at 12:36 AM    


Love this Jack, and as usual, went in a direction did not see coming. You have this uncanny ability to keep your writing "conversational" and homey, like it's to me, but then elevate to another level. Love you, miss you. xoxoxooox

Angela Cohan

July 29th, 2012 at 2:12 AM    


Excellent poem by Jack Grapes. Thank you Wendy and Adam for creating such a wonderful platform for our treasured poets.

toni-Ann Walker

July 29th, 2012 at 3:51 AM    


Jack if only you were in charge of everything ….the world would be such a better place.,,..You Shine Toni

Matthew

July 29th, 2012 at 3:32 PM    


I've been hosed before, but I rather get a good soak. If it's good enough for God, then soak me too. Thanks Jack for this meditation.
Thanks Wendy.

Lynn Brown

July 29th, 2012 at 5:58 PM    


Love the unexpected turn…water light as a feather, clear and sparkling. Then on to water God as well.

Blessings!

Thanks Jack

jonboy57

July 29th, 2012 at 6:36 PM    


I love the idea of being the guy in charge of watering in heavan, or anywhere…very tender piece…thanks Jack

Elena Irving

July 29th, 2012 at 7:37 PM    


As usual, Jack Grapes is the master of showing us the wisdom inherent in his talent. Life when enjoyed simply by being alive in the sun is not only self-fulfillment in his own psyche as an artist and poet but an awakening in all of us; a re-affirmation of even ordinary things as what they really are; miracles of being here another day, feeling the sun, holding the hose and watering grass on a hot day.

Stacey K. Black

July 29th, 2012 at 7:37 PM    


Thank you Jack for a wonderful journey!!!

crzy4wds

July 29th, 2012 at 7:49 PM    


Ah! As I sit here in the backyard listening to the waterfall, your poem splashes me in the face and wakes me up, Jack–just like always do when commenting on our work. Miss the feedback.

Julie

July 29th, 2012 at 8:22 PM    


Thanks for posting Jack's poem. I am fortunate to have had the cooling back spray of his watering in my life.

J. Olson

July 29th, 2012 at 8:30 PM    


This poem was read by one of Jack's students (1995-1999) to The Poetry Club @ The Rogers Senior Center in Huntington Beach last Thursday. The membership said, "That is a very good poem. The images are so clear." The club president said, "I really like that poem." I agree. His poem got me to journaling again which led me to: I Got My Netflix Streaming after Muddy Waters. Way to go, Jack. Gerald T. Olson, Sr.

Celine West

July 29th, 2012 at 8:35 PM    


I like the idea of watering God. I mean it gets really hot down here so I would imagine that God would appreciate a soak down. Anyway, it's fun to get watered on a warm day.

susan manders

July 29th, 2012 at 8:40 PM    


Jack takes the mundanity of life, which isn't mundane at all when you are lucky enough to read his absolute honesty which becomes his brilliance.

Bev Jackson

July 29th, 2012 at 9:16 PM    


Wonderful. I can always count on Jack for a great poem.

sarah Mac donald

July 29th, 2012 at 9:51 PM    


For now, Jack is watering poets, nourishing us in this space and time. Thanks so much Jack for your kindness and caring that we each of us, each one of us, gets to speak in our own, particular voice that is God-given. Keep it up! and don't forget to wear your hat out in the sun. Sarah Mac Donald

Elaine Mintzer

July 29th, 2012 at 9:56 PM    


Well, I've known Jack for a while now, and I can imagine him as God's hose-man. But I can also imagine him traversing the cosmos and adding a little steam in the nether world.
Thanks Jack.

sharon barr

July 29th, 2012 at 10:05 PM    


Love this Jack . xo

…and The Cultural Weekly.

Beth Howe

July 30th, 2012 at 1:39 AM    


Jack, I love this poem. As Suzanne mentioned above, your ability to elevate the mundane to a sacred level is what makes your poetry so accessible. I believe it’s why we are able to digest it with such meaning. It’s as if your arrangement of words makes your feelings and observations soluable–allowing easy absorption by the common man. Thank you for being a chemist-priest, and for giving us passage to insight and joy.

Bella Mahaya Carter

July 30th, 2012 at 4:29 AM    


Love this man. Love his poems. Thanks for publishing Jacn's work, which never fails to move, delight, and inspire me.

Francine Taylor

July 30th, 2012 at 4:34 AM    


Lovely poem Jack. Watering the flowers, the grass, the bricks, yourself and God, all in one poem….

Adesh Kaur

July 30th, 2012 at 12:24 PM    


Jack, This is a perfect poem. It gets deeper every time I read it. "Cars which have nothing to do with brick." ". . . true geraniums. I can't keep track of them all." Yes!!! I love you, Jack. I just do. Hope you'll soak me down with the watering hose in heaven.

amelia fleetwood

July 30th, 2012 at 5:02 PM    


thank you !

MaryJane O'Keefe

July 30th, 2012 at 5:09 PM    


I enjoyed the poem very much. And I gather from the comments here, that just as a dull dry hot stone is transformed into a sparkling colorful piece of beauty when soaked with water, you seem to have a talent in your mentoring and teaching for facilitating similar transformation in your students, with your apparent gift for bringing out the beauty in each soul…

Angela Kohler

July 30th, 2012 at 6:47 PM    


I like the part about God soaking up prayers. Amazing, Jack!

Debra Swihart

July 30th, 2012 at 7:39 PM    


You have watered our neighborhood with your bright spirit for many years. thank you for being you Jack. You are a refreshing soul.

Lee Perry

July 30th, 2012 at 8:49 PM    


…and God will be a lucky god indeed….

Leah Sullivan

July 30th, 2012 at 8:51 PM    


Jack masters the extraordinary ordinary. He's such a fine poet, teacher, human being – ya gotta love 'im! And I do! Thank you, Cultural Weekly. This was a delightful light full.

Eileen Wesson

July 30th, 2012 at 8:55 PM    


I love this poem Jack. Every time I read it I feel more nourished. So happy you are on this planet. It would be a dry place with out you. xo Eileen

lkthayer

July 30th, 2012 at 10:44 PM    


Jack, Jack, Jack…this poem, so sweet & simple & pure
gave me goosebumps at the end. That's all I want
from a poem & a poet…to give me goosebumps.
Now, if I had a lawn, I'd want you to water it.

Bravo.

L.K. Thayer

Roni Keller

July 31st, 2012 at 12:14 AM    


Jack is the answer, now what was the question? Thank you for bringing us more Jack Grapes, Wendy and Adam!

Philip

July 31st, 2012 at 3:00 PM    


Great as always to read your poem. Cheers

Bob Margulies

July 31st, 2012 at 5:25 PM    


Jack, enjoyed your poem. Too often, as we live in our world, we focus on ourselves and ignore everything else.The beauty in front of us is there for a reason!

Sharon

July 31st, 2012 at 6:08 PM    


Wonderful imagery; it's always a delight to read one of Jack's poems. Thanks!

Guest

July 31st, 2012 at 6:11 PM    


Please share more of Jack's poetry. His stuff is never dull, so human, neither too fancy nor too ragged, and just watered enough to make a garden grow, cakes moist, or God cool and happy on a summer day. Deceptively domestic and simple, it's full of the real thing.

Jeff Newman

July 31st, 2012 at 7:00 PM    


Tending to the needs of others and finding one's place in all levels of concern

thanks Jack

Mary Rose Betten

July 31st, 2012 at 7:27 PM    


Ah Jack: You baptize our imagination. I forever will see you chatting with God, distributing His groceries as you attend to the parched garden plot of your class awaiting, life-giving insights. You reach not just the "A list," in front, kissed by the sun, oh no, you reach way, way back to those of us in the XYZ patch, dehydrated by fear. We sense the moistness of your wisdom, lift our faces to the sun, becoming at last the writers you and your buddy, God know we can be. You, dearest, Big Daddy Jack, are indeed, the water you write about, "Noblest of all the elements." ~ Mary Rose Betten

rebeccaveez

July 31st, 2012 at 7:29 PM    


his power for creating the most salient image is remarkable…makes me want to go water mine, i'm always looking for new ways to feel deeply universal, now I have to find that damned hose. GOOD JOB JACK!

geoffman

July 31st, 2012 at 7:37 PM    


This is a wonderful poem. Thank you for bringing it to us. I look forward to reading more selections from LA's vibrant poet's community.

wendygoldman

July 31st, 2012 at 8:06 PM    


Such a delicious poem. It's stayed with me for days. More, more please, Cultural Weekly!

Marilee Burton

July 31st, 2012 at 9:25 PM    


Oh, I've not watered my lawn yet this week, forgot all about it, but now that I've read the poem and remembered the task, I wonder, will it be as celestial as this poem, when I do so?

julie

July 31st, 2012 at 10:12 PM    


Jack :) such a beautiful poem – the images and your words touched my heart.

Elizabeth

July 31st, 2012 at 11:04 PM    


A great moment-wonderfully palpable.

Merry Elkins

July 31st, 2012 at 11:42 PM    


Jack,
What a wonderful poem!
God has watered you well. It's only fair that you should give him/her a spray or two, too.
xo

Danielle T

July 31st, 2012 at 11:49 PM    


What a beautiful poem. I want to read it again and again. Thank you Jack. You really added joy to my thoughts around death. I shall now have the gift of associating those wonderful images of you up there watering everything. Thank you again.

@PRHollywood

August 1st, 2012 at 12:25 AM    


What a beautiful poem, Jack. It took the stress out of my day. Made me want to stop for a moment and visit a little bit of heaven. Wonderful! Oh, and Jack don't forget to save me a house in heaven next to yours. I definitely want to soak up all the good nurturing. What a guy, you are!

Helen Hunt

August 1st, 2012 at 2:53 AM    


Helen

Beautiful!!! I need watering. So grateful to have read it.

MedsRWorking

August 1st, 2012 at 3:14 AM    


Diamonds of light in the back spray of a garden hose. Divine. Whatever your belief system…

Karla Lee

August 1st, 2012 at 3:51 AM    


The words went away, to more images of that liquid space held behind the veil. Thanks Jack, for a much needed slice of this pie…
And thank you, Wendy and Adam, for the taste.

AE Gaupp

August 1st, 2012 at 4:56 AM    


A rose by any other name, Jack! I suspect that you remember all the real names–the words that breathe life into– each little thing in our heaven on earth. I'll be the woman that holds God's groceries so's not to reserve his carrying arm from your gift, your relief. Thank you, Cultural Weekly! More, more, please?

Debra Hori

August 1st, 2012 at 6:56 AM    


Your words flow…seem so effortless in the making. I know this is not so, that you work hard at it, but there is such an ease to how the words reach out to me. Thank you.

Mia Sara

August 1st, 2012 at 11:28 AM    


Oh, Grapes. You are the essence. Yes, you are. This poem is getting me through the heat.

Bhalin

August 1st, 2012 at 3:26 PM    


This poem puts the Buddha smile on my face. Yes, diamonds of light and droplets of peace.

Suzanne Lukather

August 1st, 2012 at 3:33 PM    


Loved the guided tour to heaven. Refreshing. We need more of this and less of The Dark Night.

MarshallRagir

August 1st, 2012 at 3:35 PM    


I've always said you're the gatekeeper for pure creativity. Now I find out you're really just watering humanity for the big guy. Sheesh I shoulda known. Good job.

Daniel

August 1st, 2012 at 4:03 PM    


Jack, as always your poems are at once simple and elegant in their simplicity. Thank you for sharing it with the writing community and thanks to Wendy Rainy for making that possible. Please do more! – Daniel O'Madigan Gribble

J.Davis

August 1st, 2012 at 4:18 PM    


i love this

Stephanie

August 1st, 2012 at 4:29 PM    


Remarkable work Jack. I love this poem.

Sandra

August 1st, 2012 at 4:55 PM    


Jack – love your poem and your gift of seeing beauty. God is lucky to have you watering him:)

Nikki

August 1st, 2012 at 4:57 PM    


Mmm. I can smell the wet summer grass. Beautiful piece. Wish I could trade in the concrete parking lot across the street for a yard and a hose. Can I also say how nice it is to stop for a moment and read a poem? Just to block out the chaos of the day for a few minutes and read something that awakened my imagination and brought red to the cheeks of my weekday robot-self… That was nice. Thank you for the escape.

Jennifer Shneiderman

August 1st, 2012 at 5:44 PM    


I do live around the corner

Although I’m not the one with the groceries

It is nice to see you nurturing

Your garden

Your family

Your being

Refreshing

Jason A.

August 1st, 2012 at 5:46 PM    


This is exquisite. Please feature Jack Grapes more. Please feature poetry more.

Mary Holmes

August 1st, 2012 at 5:50 PM    


You placed smack dab in the middle of summer, standing beside you, lost in a daze diamonds of water and words. I did not want to go back inside. Jack, this poem is great, just great. Thanks for the sense memories. And thanks to Cultural Weekly, Adam and Wendy for answering the question as to who will elevate the conversation. You have.

Jamie

August 1st, 2012 at 6:06 PM    


Beautiful, unpretentious poem. It reminds me of a line from one of my favorite songs, "I am not Jesus, though I have the same initials, I am the man who stays home and does the dishes, and how was your day?" God is in the details.

Sigrid Bergie

August 1st, 2012 at 6:54 PM    


A poem to be read again and again and to be shared with every-and anyone—so off to FB Land it goes!!!

camille stranger

August 1st, 2012 at 7:12 PM    


this man and his words are a gift to this earth
he deserves to be our next poet laureate

Nicola

August 1st, 2012 at 7:23 PM    


I love this poem….smells of summer and life and with enough whimsy to make you smile. Thank you for publishing. More poems please

Maxine K

August 1st, 2012 at 8:00 PM    


Mr. Grapes,

Your images reverberate like fine wine ! Watering my garden now has a spiritual quality.

Thanks to the Cultural Weekly's folks like Wendy, we can enjoy such treats.

Dresenia

August 1st, 2012 at 9:10 PM    


You da man.

Adrian Bloom

August 1st, 2012 at 10:11 PM    


Humorous, subtly profound. A true gem.

Roz Levine

August 1st, 2012 at 10:41 PM    


Jack, this is a beautiful reminder to water the gardens of our lives wherever we are in this world.

Joe Kennedy

August 1st, 2012 at 11:08 PM    


Mr. Grapes, I presume. Just the thing, some literate lemonade to kick back and inhale summer. My turn for the hose! best regards, Joe K.

satan

August 2nd, 2012 at 2:28 AM    


Uh fine image moment…but one thing…There is no friggin' God! Stop the propaganda!

jack grapes

August 2nd, 2012 at 4:31 AM    


dear satan,
don't be so gullible.
just because a poet from Los Angeles says there's a god,
you gonna take it at face value?!?!
you should read my other poems,
especially the one that says
"God forgives me for knowing he doesn't exist."
Now, you! We all know you're real.
Do you ever play poker?
jack

Sara Melzer

August 2nd, 2012 at 7:10 AM    


A wonderful, oddly touching poem. So simple — it builds, and builds with small details so that the water planted a seed inside my soul and nourished it. I felt like a new flower in reading this poem. You have an amazing ability to transform the ordinary into something extraordinary. Thank you.

C. Jean Pearlstein

August 2nd, 2012 at 7:39 PM    


So simple and down to earth, bringing the moment to life, yet so very profound and poignant, with a touch of humor. I, like Lisa, got goosebumps. Thank you Jack for giving me that moment, and thanks to Cultural Weekly for allowing Jack’s blooms to flourish.

Mary Petrie Lowen

August 2nd, 2012 at 11:15 PM    


God is a very lucky woman. :) Thank you for publishing this beautiful poem, Cultural Weekly. Jack Grapes is a treasure.

Mifanwy

August 3rd, 2012 at 1:48 AM    


Mifanwy

Jack, you amaze me as always since I first met you years ago. Your poems are an entry into the "other" world.

Julia

August 3rd, 2012 at 5:32 AM    


Beautiful, Jack! Thank you!!

Jean Katz

August 3rd, 2012 at 5:48 AM    


Jack, you follow your own best advice, and “write like you talk.” I was out there on the lawn with you, feeling the spray from the hose, and musing about what the present moment means.

Wendy, thanks for gifting us with Jack’s poem.

Susanna Spies

August 14th, 2012 at 2:55 PM    


Absolutely beautiful Jack. You are the gatekeeper of putting feeling to words, water to our souls and smiles to our faces. WOW. I feel so moved, keep sprinkling your amazingness for the world to be refreshed by.

Laurie Jefferson

March 6th, 2013 at 1:35 AM    


You already water God with every word that you write!

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